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January 25, 2010
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:iconjonniedee:
I've been trying to work on Typography as of late. This is the 2nd project I have worked on. Let me know your thoughts.

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Mood: Joy ~Divine-Mania Feb 4, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Hey,
Try using maybe a total of three fonts (including the title) to help the heirarchy. Use color, slightly different font face (or use a serif) and different point size for heirarchy. For an early try it looks better than some stuff I've seen in school. :D
Cool beans!
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*jonniedee Feb 4, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Hey, thanks a lot for the constructive thoughts. :)
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Mood: Joy ~thesacredmuse Feb 1, 2010
The only thing i can see that i may have changed is the font colors. Maybe not using white for the less headline info just so its easier to see what it is that the main pull is.
I think its beautiful !
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*jonniedee Feb 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for the input. :)
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~JCEckels Jan 30, 2010  Student
Hey I'm working on a similar project so it's fun for me to see someone else doing it :)

I think the color composition is gorgeous. And there appears to be a clear hierarchy for your headlines.

This is definitely picking on my part, but I would just say watch your kerning in the title. I don't know if you intend for the "K" and "A" to be touching in KARMA. And there's a bit of a gap between "0" and "1" in "1001" (the second pair).

Great job! I hope you keep us updated on your typography stuff :)
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*jonniedee Jan 30, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Hey JC. Thanks for the comments and good luck with your typography. I left all kerning at default :)
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`pendlestock Jan 28, 2010   Photographer
Great stock use :aww:
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*jonniedee Jan 28, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
TY! :D
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*Jacob-Routzahn Jan 26, 2010  Professional Photographer
I think that it looks great! The black and white are very nice clean colors to use and the flow of each title follows the lines around the subjects profile. It works b/c it isn't distracting from the main subject and it still legible. In the future maybe try new colors like a blue cover may look great with a certain type of green or yellow. But so far so good in my book!
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*jonniedee Jan 26, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks Jacob. I'm going to mix up to colors a bit on my next typography project. I think I am just being a wussy. :)
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